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Paragraph 1: INTRODUCTION – restate the Question and tell what you will write

Paragraph 2: COMPENDIUM/SYNOPSIS

(1).In “Title”… from the printing material Name/book………….. Dated…… page….. (Author)…. contends that + (2).MI of the title (if any) + (3).MIs of Paragraph 1+2+3+4+5+6…….etc. +   (4).MI of the last paragraph and the last sentence of the last paragraph. [LSLP] (Using Reported Speech or restatement / paraphrasing statement)

Paragraph 3: ANALYSIS:[ 7-Qs Model] – begin with the definition responding the Question (principle) and followed by the 7-Q Model’s Key Words: (1) strength, (2) distortion (error/ weakness), (3) balance or bias, (4) alternatives needed (well considered), (5) short-term and longterm implication, (6) implementation (with or without barriers if any state the way to overcome it), (7) any needs of change, re-examination and exploration.  

           ANALYSIS [7-Qs Model]

(1) The strength of organizing dissent is………. (2) The distortion (error/ weakness) or organizing dissent is………………….…… (3) The principle of organizing dissent is balance / bias because………………………., (4) The Alternatives needed (well considered) are ……………………………… (5) The short-term and longterm implication are in short term organizing dissent.…………..….., while in longterm organizing dissent demands……………………….. (6) In its implementation (with or without barriers [3M: Money, Men, Material] if any state the way to overcome it), [educate, training, group dialogue, group discussion, focus group] …………………… (7) Any needs of change, re-examination and exploration. [space and time].  

Paragraph 4: ARGUMENT

-CONFIRMATION

–REFUTATION

Paragraph 5: PERSONAL VIEW; Responsiveness using Persuasive Model – (1) reasoning sentence, (2) emotional sentence, (3) principle sentence, and (4) evidence /example sentence.

           PERSONAL VIEW [HVT Model]

(1) 3 Reasoning sentence [Nos. 3&4 of Analysis] ,…………. (2) Convince dissent/readers,…….……… (3) By principle, [S.1 of Introduction],  .……………….. (4) evidence /example sentence……………………..

Paragraph 6: RECOMMENDATION using AI-Model – (1) The best of what is (BWI), (2) what might be (WMB), (3) what should be (WSB), and (4) what will be (WWB).

           RECOMMENDATION [AI-Model]

(1) (BWI), [No.4 of Analysis] (2) what might be (WMB) [personal View-S.2], (3) what should be (WSB) [No.6 of Analysis], and (4) what will be (WWB).

 Paragraph 7:  CONCLUSION

S.1. Brief the question [restate Introduction ]

S.2. Strength and weakness [Para.3: S vs W ]

S.3. Agree or disagree [from Argument: Warrant + Rebuttal]

S.4. Principle [Para 5: principle statement]

S.5. BWI & WWB.[Para 6: BWI & WWWB.]

INTRODUCTION: บทนำ

SYNOPSIS/CONPENDIUM/SUMMARY: สรุปย่อคเนื้อหา

ANALYSIS: การวิเคราะห์

ARGUMENT: การโต้แย้งด้วยเหตุด้วยผล

        Confirmation-1. Agree เห็นด้วย (5ปย) Data ดูที่อินโทว่าพารากราฟอะไร ex data พ.3 ปย.2 Rebuttal คือปย.3 ยกเว้นที่ขึ้นด้วย But,however,yet,nevertheless,conveniently,on the contrary, in opposition to, contradictorily, in contradiction,on the other hand

        Refutation -2. Disagree ไม่เห็นด้วย(5ปย)

PERSONAL VIEWPOINTS: ความเห็นส่วนตัว

RECOMMENDATION: ข้อเสนอแนะ

CONCLUSION: สรุป

Ex.

In “More Millennials Are Dying ‘Deaths of Despair,’ as Overdose and Suicide Rates Climb, from TIMEONLINE | June 13, 2019; Jamie Ducharme claimed that these issues [drugs, alcohol or suicide] can contribute to mental health conditions, and younger Americans report higher rates of depression and anxiety than previous generations. (par 5:1-2)

Do you agree with Jamie Ducharme? Discuss in the Toulmin Argumentative Essay, give your personal views and recommend the best way to deal with these issues using AI Model.

INTRODUCTION

In “More Millennials Are Dying ‘Deaths of Despair,’ as Overdose and Suicide Rates Climb, from TIMEONLINE | June 13, 2019; Jamie Ducharme claimed that these issues [drugs, alcohol or suicide] can contribute to mental health conditions, and younger Americans report higher rates of depression and anxiety than previous generations. I do agree with the trade deal contains.I shall present its compendium or synopsis,  and further to illustrate my analyses with 7-Q Model, Toulmin Arguments showing confirmation and refutation, to present my personal view, recommendation and end  with a conclusion.

COMPENDIUM/SYNOPSIS

JAMIE DUCHARME | TIMEONLINE | JUNE 13, 2019 (MI1) Trust for America’s Health and Well Being Trust. (MI2) Between 2007 and 2017, drug-related deaths increased by 108% among adults’ ages 18 to 34, while alcohol-related deaths increased by 69% and suicides increased by 35%, according to the report, which drew on Centers for Disease Control and Prevention data. (MI3) Opioids, including synthetic opioids like fentanyl, were involved in the majority of drug overdose deaths in 2017, the new report shows. (MI4) But the report argues that there are also a number of generation-specific factors that are plaguing millennials, including financial stressors stemming from student loan debt, health care and high housing costs. (MI5) While there’s never a single cause of suicide, mental health conditions like these are considered a primary risk factor. (MI6) It also calls for better substance misuse treatment within the criminal justice system, since a dispropor- tionately high number of millennials are incarcerated.

ANALYSIS

(1) The strength of More Millennials Are Dying ‘Deaths of Despair is once addicted or drunk, it will prevent us from stopping or quitting easily and ill-effects to the Gen Y &Z, higher rate of their depression which lead to Death of Despair.(2) On the contrary, it distortion is making it casier and more affordable for young people to get good health insurance; implementing better drog abuse monitoring and prescription practices nationwide; and further taxing alcohol to drive down safes (3) The concept is imbalance the GenY&Z, could avoid them and quick access to medication. (4) Alternatives are death penalty be verdict to all traffickers rather than avoidances and medications. (5) In short-term and long-term, the Addiction Act should impose death penalty for traflickers an involved. (6)In implementing Addition Act, there would be heaps of bariers but to overcome them; the central Govemnment should launch propaganda on the Addiction Act emphasizing “‘Death Penalty to cope with Death of Despair. (7)The concept should be changed, reexamined and further explored.

ARGUMENT

CONFIRMATION

(1)These issues can contribute to mental health conditions, and younger Americans report higher rates of depression and ansiety than previous generations. (2)There’s never a single cause of suicide, mental death (3.1) conditions like these are considered a primary risk factor. (3.2) Social support may also be lacking for miLlennials, as fewer people take part in Taitb- and community-based organizations nnd more people delay marriage. (4) The report offers a number of recommendations for slowing these troubling increases in “deaths of despair.” including making treatment and screening for mental health and substance use disorders more accessible and part of routine bealthcare: prioritizing prevention program-is: making it easier and more aflordable for young people to get good health insurance; implementing better drug abuse monitoring and prescription practices nationwide; and further taxing aleohol to drive down sales. (5) As such I would agree with famie Ducharme.

REFUTATION

(1) The report offers a number of recommendations for slowing these troubling

increases in “deaths of despair,’ including making treatment and screening for mental health and substance use disorders more accessible and part of routine healthcare; prioritizing prevention programs; making it casier and more affordable for young people to get good health insurance; implementing better drig abuse monitoring and prescription practices nationwide; and further taxing alcohol to drive down sales. (2) It also calls for better substance misuse treatment within the criminal justice system, since a disproportionately high number of millennials are cerated.(3) There’s been a marked uptick in so-called deaths of those involving drugs, alcohol or suicide–among millennials over the last decade, according to a new report released by public-health groups Trist for America’s Health and Well Being Trust.(4) These issues [drigs, alcohol or suicide] can contribute to mental health conditions, and younger Americans report higher rates of depression and anxicty than previous generations (5) As such I would disagrce with Jamie Ducharme.

PERSONAL VIEW

Drugs, alcobol or suicide] can contribute to mental bealth conditions, addiction and death of Despair to the younger Americans report higher rates of depression and anxiety than previous generations. It is necessary to provide medication, counselling and quick access to treatments for them. By principle, drugs, alcohol or suicide] can contribute to mental health conditions which leads to Death of Despair. For example, young people, the report notes, are typically more likely than older adults to engage in risk-taking behaviors–including drug and alcohol use—due to their stage in development.

RECOMMENDATION

The best way is to exercise death penalty to all traffickers but medication,counseling provided for addicts.  The traffickers might reduce while the addicts are medicated. The government and justice admiration should impose severe penalty and confiscation all traffickers. The death of despair will fade soon form young peoples and societies.

CONCLUSION

In “More Millennials Are Dying ‘Deaths of Despair,’ as Overdose and Suicide Rates Climb, from TIMEONLINE | June 13, 2019; Jamie Ducharme claimed that these issues [drugs, alcohol or suicide] can contribute to mental health conditions, and younger Americans report higher rates of depression and anxiety than previous generations. I do agree with the trade deal contains.I shall present its compendium or synopsis,  and further to illustrate my analyses with 7-Q Model, Toulmin Arguments showing confirmation and refutation, to present my personal view, recommendation and end  with a conclusion. The strength of More Millennials Are Dying ‘Deaths of Despair is once addicted or drunk, it will prevent us from stopping or quitting easily and ill-effects to the Gen Y &Z, higher rate of their depression which lead to Death of Despair.On the contrary, it distortion is making it casier and more affordable for young people to get good health insurance; implementing better drog abuse monitoring and prescription practices nationwide; and further taxing alcohol to drive down safes. These issues can contribute to mental health conditions, and younger Americans report higher rates of depression and ansiety than previous generations. The report offers a number of recommendations for slowing these troubling increases in “deaths of despair.” including making treatment and screening for mental health and substance use disorders more accessible and part of routine bealthcare: prioritizing prevention program-is: making it easier and more aflordable for young people to get good health insurance; implementing better drug abuse monitoring and prescription practices nationwide; and further taxing aleohol to drive down sales. By principle, drugs, alcohol or suicide] can contribute to mental health conditions which leads to Death of Despair. The best way is to exercise death penalty to all traffickers but medication,counseling provided for addicts.  The death of despair will fade soon form young peoples and societies.